Hey! So my name is Chris, and I just started writing stories a few months ago. I decided to try posting them on this site to share with my friends/get feedback from anyone new. I have one story I really want to get off its feet (Its been in my head since I was 13), but i’m not sure if i’m using the right writing style from me, which you can find here. Its a fantasy story, but I don’t wan’t to give anything else away until I can write it down coherently.
I also started a story just for fun, which my brothers at least think is better, getting inspiration from a drawing my cousin Mariah did. You can find the story I am attempting to write here The protagonist is very foul mouthed and arrogant, as a warning.
Any feedback, especially on which writing style you think would work better, or if I should change them all together, or any areas I can improve in, would be appreciated.
Archontis 